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Solus
Dec 31, 2013 15:35:46 GMT -5
Post by X2 on Dec 31, 2013 15:35:46 GMT -5
I'm actually quite content with the changes you've made. There is still one thing I'm not entirely sure about, I will wait to see what Moon has to say about it.
But the fact that his consciousness can dissolve into the "other realm" and be mostly like a ghost. I do like the fact that other spirits can invade his body when he's in a weakened state. But it reads more like a possession. It would make more sense as a possession. That way you could RP him more like the spirit is inside his body, trying to convince/force him to do something he doesn't want to.
Also, I think Solus gaining the strengths and abilities of whichever spirit takes over him, allows for godmodding, and could potentially make him an almost invincible character. Which is not something we allow on this board.
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Solus
Jan 1, 2014 3:26:36 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Jan 1, 2014 3:26:36 GMT -5
Modified....I hope its better
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Solus
Jan 2, 2014 22:42:06 GMT -5
Post by Moonstruck on Jan 2, 2014 22:42:06 GMT -5
Alright so nearly there!
First of, this is really easy to fix - Solus' history. In the current history there is no mention as all of Solus joining the tribe, so please add that in.
As for the worries about the ability, to avoid any potential problems of godmodding in the future what about that okay spirits can possess Solus in a weakened state and that Solus being in the "other realm" weakens him further. But the spirit can ONLY bring its consciousness into Solus' body. No abilities, no strengths, no weaknesses other than those that Solus possesses?
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Solus
Jan 3, 2014 22:59:34 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Jan 3, 2014 22:59:34 GMT -5
is this better?
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Solus
Jan 4, 2014 21:20:54 GMT -5
Post by Moonstruck on Jan 4, 2014 21:20:54 GMT -5
Better, thank you for making the changes.
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Solus
Jan 5, 2014 22:16:47 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Jan 5, 2014 22:16:47 GMT -5
Yay!
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